Mise-en-scene video feedback and learner response

 1) Type up your feedback from your teacher in full.

WWW:

  • Excellent planning, using media terminology.
  • Excellent scripting, using the correct formality.
  • Use of make - up (blood)
  • Use of titles
  • Excellent cinematography.
  • Use of music / soundtrack 
  • Costume (mask) + props (knife)
  • Body Language + performance 
  • Use of slow-motion

2) Type up a summary of the feedback you have had from the rest of the class - bullet points is fine.

WWW:

  • Excellent planning
  • Excellent scripting
  • Good media terminology
  • Good use of CLAMPS
  • Good camera angles / pans
  • Good action placement 
EBI:
  • Include link of original video
  • Music is a bit louder than the dialogue

3) Use all the feedback you've been given to write your own self-assessment of your video using WWW (What Went Well) and EBI (Even Better If...)

What went well for me was the actual filming as it was accurate to the original video, where the use of make-up, costume, and setting was authentic to the original video as well as the placement of the actors and how we acted. In addition, the soundtrack also gave off that same energy from the original video as it helps build up that intensity of the scene. However, it would have been better if I embedded the original video on my blog. Also, if I lowered down the soundtrack and made the dialogue louder. 

4) Now reflect on your own work in more detail. How did your planning (script, shot list) help clarify and develop your ideas?

My planning help clarify and develop my ideas as it helped me to be organised throughout this practical. It also helped me get to know what I need to get done such as the shot lists and if I finished off that camera shot. Also, the script helped me to slowly get the acting finished as to what I and the other actors have to do, making it very efficient. In addition, the script helped us to know more of what we had to do and what the actors should act out or say. 

5) Thinking technically, how could you improve your work for future videos? (E.g. filming, editing, audio levels etc.)

To improve my work for future videos I think I have to explore more on adobe premiere pro, make sure that the dialogues of the actors are clear and are loud enough for the audience to hear, and make sure that the lighting is accurate. 

6) Finally, what have you learned regarding the importance of mise-en-scene in film and television? Write a paragraph to answer this.

I have learned that when filming something, it is important to pay attention to CLAMPS as it plays an important role on what the video I would be filming is. It also helped me learn that I should understand and plan out my ideas on what I have to do to be able to apply it when I'm using CLAMPS as the mise-en-scene are the ones that would create and communicate meaning to the audience which will then help the producers to create a film genre such as action or thriller to then give the audience the entertainment they could be interested in.

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